Sunday, April 22, 2007

Enemy Of One

Dreaming off A silent Sky
walking On Those tragic Times
Sorry for those inconsistencies
craving for what used to be
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Time , Our Distant Enemy
Lost From Sight , I Believe Its Me
Days Come And Nights Just Follow
What is Lost Found Never To Be
--
Drenched by thoughts of days we lived
Holding on to these lucid dream
Obscured by the future it seems
Watching as this silence between

11 Comments:

At 8:34 PM, Blogger - Ubiquitous - said...

I'm sure the fact that the starting letter of every word in the second verse, is in capitals, is intentional.

Any reason why? :)

 
At 8:37 PM, Blogger Jay said...

Hmmmmm.. Its only cause them lines are strong with a background!

 
At 6:07 AM, Blogger - Ubiquitous - said...

:)

Waiting for more poems/songs. Didn't know you were a musician as well. Discovered today!

 
At 4:39 AM, Blogger Jay said...

Will post soon.. Its there in my previous semester books.. Have to lok for them!

 
At 6:37 AM, Blogger i hang like a star; said...

...so, where do you play?

 
At 7:00 PM, Blogger Jay said...

Hey.. I play at any gig opportunities i get.. I organise shows thru Head Rush(Own venture)!

 
At 8:31 PM, Blogger i hang like a star; said...

in bangalore?

 
At 8:33 PM, Blogger Jay said...

Yes ma'am! :)

 
At 3:23 AM, Blogger Paddy said...

'off' silent skies? or did u mean 'of' silent skies!?
good job nevertheless :)

 
At 3:30 AM, Blogger Jay said...

Thanks..

Wrong Spelling! I meant of!

 
At 11:05 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

You write very well.

 

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